1. Read the style guide. If the cutoff is 30pgs, don't send in 52pg papers.
2. Don't send in 52pgs no matter what unless it is a law review.
4. And if you do, don't send in bullet points!
6. If the hypotheses or data section has a bunch of theory citations, that's a red flag. Esp. If they are new to the reader.
8. Make sure the theories match your level of analysis. If you are analyzing red apples, theories about the history of orchards are not generally relevant.
10. Subgroup analysis requires prior theorizing otherwise it is ad hoc. That duck hunters are in fact very different is something I should be alerted to in the theory.
12. Don't use 3 tables for something that can be presented in one, e.g. subgroup analyses.
14. Tell a clear story. If your story has the clarity of a Trump justification, you can make an excellent cabinet secretary, but it is doubtful that you will pass peer review.
18. Did I mention edit?
20. Graphs are great but make sure they are clearly labeled and the lines differentiate well in black and white. Cause variations in dotted lines are hard to tell.