JOURNALISM LESSON: If you're going to front-page-and-notification a report, use an editor!
--Awful sentence: "Doctors W/o Borders condemned...saying it hasn't seen bloodshed at this level in years."
1) Makes it sound like @MSF doesn't pay attn - far worse bloodshed....
--Awful sentence: "Doctors W/o Borders condemned...saying it hasn't seen bloodshed at this level in years."
1) Makes it sound like @MSF doesn't pay attn - far worse bloodshed....
...all over the world, all the time.
2) MORE IMPORTANTLY, they didn't say that. Compare level to only 4 yrs ago.
3) No mention of danger of mother bringing infant to dangerous protest encampment.
4) No mention of Israel's (claimed) reasons for shooting the tear gas (or,....
2) MORE IMPORTANTLY, they didn't say that. Compare level to only 4 yrs ago.
3) No mention of danger of mother bringing infant to dangerous protest encampment.
4) No mention of Israel's (claimed) reasons for shooting the tear gas (or,....
...live bullets, for that matter).
5) No mention of what may have been taking place around the infant's location at time of tear gas.
6) Incomplete context, overall.
Yes, very horrible outcome & reporting is necessary. However, featured reports need to be edited.
cc: @willafrej
5) No mention of what may have been taking place around the infant's location at time of tear gas.
6) Incomplete context, overall.
Yes, very horrible outcome & reporting is necessary. However, featured reports need to be edited.
cc: @willafrej
Unroll please, @threadreaderapp
