an interesting chapter(=sarga) - and perhaps the most tragic - in the Valmiki Ramayana is the 45th sarga of Aranya kaanDa. valmikiramayan.net/utf8/aranya/sa…
the interesting part: there is no mention of Lakshmana drawing a rekha(line) 🙂
now the tragic part:😭
सौमित्रे मित्र रूपेण भ्रातुः त्वम् असि शत्रुवत् ||३-४५-५
Son of Sumitra, you are an enemy of your brother(Rama)in the disguise of a friend.
इच्छसि त्वम् विनश्यन्तम् रामम् लक्ष्मण मत् कृते ||३-४५-६
Lakshmana,for wanting me you desire Rama's destruction.
अशक्यः तव वैदेही भर्ता जेतुम् न संशयः |३-४५-११
There is no doubt that your husband is invincible.
लक्ष्मणेन एवम् उक्ता तु क्रुद्धा संरक्त लोचना ||३-४५-२०
Thus told by Lakshmana, she got enraged with bloodshot eyes.
अनार्य (oh ignoble),.. अहम् तव प्रियम् मन्ये रामस्य व्यसनम् महत् |३-४५-२२
i feel, Rama's great pain is very dear to you.
उत्तरम् न उत्सहे वक्तुम् दैवतम् भवती मम || ३-४५-२८
i have no answer for the godly person that you are,
seems like, this is the nature of all women in this world...
and, human too is Lakshmana 😭
he says,
धिक् त्वाम् अद्य प्रणश्यन्तीम् यन् माम् एवम् विशंकसे || ३-४५-३२
~ for doubting my character, may you perish. 😭
then, ..
गमिष्ये यत्र काकुत्स्थः स्वस्ति ते अस्तु वरानने||३-४५-३३
let me go find Rama, may you be safe.
रक्षन्तु त्वाम् विशालाक्षि समग्रा वन देवताः|
may all forest gods protect you.
Sita then expresses her grief at Rama's separation,that she would die if he is not there.
Shabari's tapas
Popularly everyone knows about the berry's offered by Shabari to rama, that too, half-eaten(tasted) berry's, to be specific. However, Valmiki picturizes a completely different scene.
Let us dig into the original, although no disrespect for other versions.
As they approach hermitage of Shabari,she directly identifies them
पादौ जग्राह रामस्य लक्ष्मणस्य च धीमतः|३-७४-६
She holds the feet of rama& lakshmana in deep respect
कच्चित् ते निर्जिता विघ्नाः कच्चित् ते वर्धते तपः|
somehow,all your enemies(अरि षट् वर्ग ) have been conquered & your tapas has progressed, isn't it?
कच्चित् ते नियतः कोप आहारः च तपोधने||३-७४-८
anger & food are also under control, ..
And, she is no simple person!
अद्य प्राप्ता तपः सिद्धिः तव संदर्शनात् मया|३-७४-११
today peak achievement of my tapas has been reached, by virtue of your meeting/coming.
..
next she recollects her seniors whom she served..
i was told by those noble maharshis
आगमिष्यति ते रामः सु पुण्यम् इमम् आश्रमम् || ३-७४-१५
rama will come to this blessed ashrama
treat them (rama and lakshmana) as atithis - honored guests
तम् च दृष्ट्वा वरान् लोकान् अक्षयान् त्वम् गमिष्यसि || ३-७४-१६
then after seeing them, you will proceed to higher worlds!
..
these various forest fruits have been collected (to serve you)
rama then asks Shabari to show them the ashrama; she then describes in detail how the sages spent their time in doing various practices- tapas, yajna etc.
now i seek your permission to giveup this physical body (and move beyond).
rama responds,
अर्चितो अहम् त्वया भद्रे गच्छ कामम् यथा सुखम् || ३-७४-३१
i am verily honored by you, great lady, please go to worlds you wish.
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