I'd argue, quite to the contrary, that while it's a translation that definitely isn't word-for-word, it's actually a very good interpretive translation and completely in keeping with the text.
Everything we are is a gift.
Everything we have is given.
Know whence all things come
and be not dismayed at their passing. (3:8)
There is no one without good.
There is no one without evil.
Each moment, you are called upon to choose what you shall bring into the world.
The choice is yours. So, too, the consequences. (2:17)
sourness,
and hatred for people
exclude you from the world. (2:15)
and insight falls to cleverness,
Truth falls to opinion,
and reason becomes rationalization. (2:14)
Do not mistake "talk" for "action."
Pity fills no stomach.
Compassion builds no house.
Understanding is not yet justice. (1:17)